Second Song Draft: Killing Me Slowly

Alright. This is my second song and I'm hoping to get feedback like last time. I really appreciated all the comments I got on the last song so I wanted to post my second one the very next week so if this feels rushed that's my excuse but enjoy.

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You knew what would happen didn’t you, you could have stopped it all if you wanted to. (wanted to)

you had to much fun standing in the middle of our war but now it's either side that stands to lose because you couldn't choose.

You're playing with my heart baby can't you see.

Pull a string here, clip a string there, now I'm falling through thin air screaming I love you.

You make me want to stay while you're pushing me away, killing me slowly, killing me slowly.

You make me want to stay while I watch you walk away, killing me slowly, killing me slowly.

And it's not like you don’t want me, It's just that you don’t love me. Because if you did there'd be no need for him. But I’m just here to fill in the hole in your heart that he leaves never to be your one and only.

You’re playing with my heart baby can't you see.

Pull a string here, clip a string there, now I'm falling through thin air screaming I love you. (I love you)

You make me want to stay while you're pushing me away killing me slowly, killing me slowly.

You make me want to stay while I watch you walk away killing me slowly killing me slowly.

You’re killing me slowly killing me slowly and now I see I was never meant to play this game never meant to win the war….. The war called love.